Alright kids. I see the growth in profile views, I'm not asking you to join or subscribe or whatever you do here, but FEEDBACK! I crave it! ;) Anywho, here's another piece I've grown fond of, also written this year. Perhaps partially inspired by Nine Inch Nail's 'The Wretched'. The song and the piece go together well, if you care to look it up :) You may have noticed in the last piece (be you that faithful, which so far is doubtful. So scroll down.) That the spacing is not standard. Lately I've been using keyboard punctuation, spacing, and bolding to add emphasis to certain pieces. I don't really know how that started, as I rarely compose a rough draft on the computer. This piece I did on paper but with the same symbols. All words are in caps to allow varied interpretations of where phrases could end and begin. --- > here's submission number two ---
Like Wind We Rush <---> We Depart
^ Who Can Be Content ---> To Believe This
Life
Is Our Last ~~~> So Wretched
We Crawl,
Through The Filth That
^Overflows --> Out Of
<-- The Gutters Of This Earth -->
Claiming Lives ~ Of
Our Lovers, Our Children,
Victims Of
~~~> The Wretched, The Wretched <~~~
<--- SIN --->
That Inhabits < OurSouls >
Deeming Us <-------------> Dooming Us
Finite
[ Happiness ] Turned To Dust <---
And Those About To Drown ---> Be They
Humble <--- Enough ---> Wise Enough
^ Will Look Up And Shout ^
S A V E U S
O Holy Night ---> ---> ><>
And This
<--- The Wretched, The Wretched --->
Night
Shall Be
~~~> Transformed
Into The Holiest
Of Nights --- As We
Fall
Fall On Our Knees ---> To Finally Hear ^
The Angel Voices --->
And Salvation
---> Becomes Ours
^ The Wretched ^
Washed In The Blood ---> Their Eyes
Opened --->
Reset --->
As Jesus Is Made
---> Our Lord <--- And
Life
--> Becomes Eternal
And All The
---> Evil <---
And All The
---> Wretchedness <---
Of This World ~~~> Of Our Making <~~~
Lies
--------> Defeated .
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